I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In Hurumanu 1, me and my class are learning about New Zealand's history. Miss came up with a subject of gold rush. It shaped human history in New Zealand.
Hi Jrae You have done some great work in the first week of Hurumanu 1. I like your backgrounds in your slideshow. Remember to keep text short in your slideshow and use your own words. Mrs Hastie
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Hi Jrae
ReplyDeleteYou have done some great work in the first week of Hurumanu 1. I like your backgrounds in your slideshow.
Remember to keep text short in your slideshow and use your own words.
Mrs Hastie