The Marshmallow!
Moon time on a cool and windy night, a boy thought today it was a good night to go camping. But he didn't know that something was spying on him. Scrunch, Scrunch! It is just an animal he thought and a voice that he has never heard in his life. He was scared of it. AHHHH! What is that? His teeth are sharp! You are not supposed to be in this world. You need to go back to your world and RAHHH! I don't have any more marshmallows!!!!!!! But he was too slow, the monster munched on his arm!
Ouch my arm he thought. He was going to get cooked! But he had an idea. He saw a big pillow that looked like a marshmallow. So he tricked the monster and ran away!
By Jrae
WOW WOW WOW Jrae!!!! This is awesome. I love how you used the words "scrunch" "scrunch" to show me the type of noise the animal is making. You also have question marks and exclamation marks in the right place. Good on you! Do you think that the boy will go camping again? Keep up the great work and please email me when you would like me to check out your blog!
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