I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
kia ora my name is olivia l. I enjoyed the part when you when you put the beet music in the video I was dancing when I was lisining to the video you brought me back to when I made a video of myselfe playing minecraft. Next time you could add some clues of were the hidin guy was because I didnt find him. But you done a good job
kia ora it is Angus.I enjoy the part when you showed us how to do it and you brought me back when I was a stage four. to improved, you could ad want you can explain what you did BLOG YOU LATER !!!!!!!!
Hi Jrae it's Chrysler here I like how you can do addition I see you got them all right you are getting good at your math maybe next time you can add some more work I think you might be able to move up a stage soon by.
Hi Jrae. Kaunteya here. I see you got every single question right! And your a stage four? you should be way higher! like atleast stage 5 or 6! You have done a great job explaining it to us. Nice job Jrae! BLOG YA LATER!!!!
Hi Jrae it's Chrysler here I like how you can do addition I see you got them all right you are getting good at your math maybe next time you can add some more work I think you might be able to move up a stage soon by.
Hi jrae it's Kevin its really good how you are getting all of the questions right also maybe if you want to you can get early stage 5 or if your really confident and think you can do it try stage 6 but it's your choice.
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ReplyDeletekia ora my name is olivia l. I enjoyed the part when you when you put the beet music in the video I was dancing when I was lisining to the video you brought me back to when I made a video of myselfe playing minecraft. Next time you could add some clues of were the hidin guy was because I didnt find him. But you done a good job
kia ora it is Angus.I enjoy the part when you showed us how to do it and you brought me back when I was a stage four. to improved, you could ad want you can explain what you did BLOG YOU LATER !!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Jrae.
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Hi Jrae it's Chrysler here I like how you can do addition I see you got them all right you are getting good at your math maybe next time you can add some more work I think you might be able to move up a stage soon by.
ReplyDeleteHi Jrae. Kaunteya here. I see you got every single question right! And your a stage four? you should be way higher! like atleast stage 5 or 6! You have done a great job explaining it to us. Nice job Jrae! BLOG YA LATER!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Jrae it's Chrysler here I like how you can do addition I see you got them all right you are getting good at your math maybe next time you can add some more work I think you might be able to move up a stage soon by.
ReplyDeleteHi jrae it's Kevin its really good how you are getting all of the questions right also maybe if you want to you can get early stage 5 or if your really confident and think you can do it try stage 6 but it's your choice.
ReplyDeleteBLOG YA LATER!!!