I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Jrae, My name is Reitu and I am a year 8 in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I like your video about very funny animals. I really liked the bit when there is a group of flamingos and in the background the song goes ‘My squad’ it made me laugh. What were you learning about?
Kia ora Jrae. Although I do like this video because it is cute, it doesn't actually have anything to do with your learning. We need to work on how to write a blog post.
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Kia Ora Jrae,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Reitu and I am a year 8 in Te Ngahere at Paihia School.
I like your video about very funny animals. I really liked the bit when there is a group of flamingos and in the background the song goes ‘My squad’ it made me laugh.
What were you learning about?
Thanks for posting,
Reitu
Kia ora Jrae.
ReplyDeleteAlthough I do like this video because it is cute, it doesn't actually have anything to do with your learning. We need to work on how to write a blog post.