I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Jrae, your work looks very interesting, although I'm wondering what class this was done it. Try sharing who you worked with in the blog post as well. I hope you game design succeeds. Look forward to seeing you play it at some point.
Hey Jrae. This post does not do justice to your creativity in developing this narrative. Next time try to develop your post a bit more rather than rush through to get it done!
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Kia Ora Jrae, your work looks very interesting, although I'm wondering what class this was done it. Try sharing who you worked with in the blog post as well. I hope you game design succeeds. Look forward to seeing you play it at some point.
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