I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Jrae This is a great start - I particularly like the name "Silverado". How did you think this up? Are you sure White Island is a good location for a theme park? There are still some things you need to complete, like the map of the theme park. I look forward to seeing your final version. - Mr Mitchell
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Hi Jrae
ReplyDeleteThis is a great start - I particularly like the name "Silverado". How did you think this up? Are you sure White Island is a good location for a theme park?
There are still some things you need to complete, like the map of the theme park. I look forward to seeing your final version.
- Mr Mitchell