I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, September 15, 2017
Friday, September 8, 2017
Respect of the new hub
Hi I am Jrae
I am going to tell you about the new hub.
I'm really excited about the hub because there are alot of new tech things as wellas there are alot of new things so we can communicate with each other all about them. It can be alot easier to communicate with each other because, as a hub, we should know each other.
I'm worried that if there is an earthquake the roof might be a little unstable and if there's a shake it might collapse.
I'm going to take my shoes off and make sure that i don't have anything muddy on my socks; not throwing things around. I'm choosing an attitude and looking at the teacher giving eye contact, respect.
Thursday, August 17, 2017
the winter poems
Winds blow my face
Igloo Rise
Net flow around
Tents blow around
Early mornings
Red roses crumble
My Writing
My Writing
Today I am looking at my progress in writing.
Not so great:
i was doing job and i was up into after twelve at night it was really tired.
Great writing:
Not so great:
i was doing job and i was up into after twelve at night it was really tired.
Great writing:
He is in a plane and he will be jumping out his name is Jrae, and he is going to save the world, he is going to land in australia. he is working for the army.
He will lead everyone to safety and he is going to come to 200 and 100 meters to the ground.
and he will do everything to save the world. he is cool. it is going to put on a parachute and he is a super hero and superhero doesn't need a cape to be a hero. but he is wearing an army suit. he does have children too, and i am going to bike to his house's too and he will have fun with his family. and he is a hero to hos family.
my good writing:
The quality
My not great writing:
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Tuesday, June 13, 2017
Wednesday, June 7, 2017
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