I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Jrae You've researched some great facts about Parihaka. Your slideshow is a bit hard to read as the text is small and there is so much on each page. Next time you could put 1-2 facts on each slide. Mrs Hastie
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Kia ora Jrae
ReplyDeleteYou've researched some great facts about Parihaka. Your slideshow is a bit hard to read as the text is small and there is so much on each page.
Next time you could put 1-2 facts on each slide.
Mrs Hastie